Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_1
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
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Spike sorting is an important pre-processing for
analyzing electrophysiological data. Authors developed a novel online
spike sorting algorithm that has the following features; (1) improved
spike detection, (2) accounting for correlated noise, (3) capturing
overlapping spikes, (4) tracking waveform dynamics, and (5) utilizing
multiple channels. Using two electrophysiological data sets, they showed
that the proposed algorithm outperformed previous state-of-the-art
methods.
- Quality Theoretical background of the paper is
solid and sound. Their claims are well supported by theoretical analysis
and experimental data.
- Clarity The paper was organized well
and is written clearly.
- Originality The proposed method
consists of a novel combination of state-of-the-art statistical methods.
The review considers that the paper is highly original.
-
Significance The proposed algorithm has a potential to enable
massively parallel recording with adaptive control of specific stimuli.
The paper will have a significant impact on the community.
Finally, here is a list of several suggestions for improving the
manuscript/future work.
- Comparing the performance by simulated
data (such as Quian Quiroga et al., 2004) may further illustrate the
strength of the proposed method.
- Line 267: The length of the
2nd data set is missing.
- Line 277: To compute D, the authors
used the first five seconds of the data. However, the necessary length of
data would depend on an activity level of neural signals (firing rate of
neurons). It would be interesting if the authors could discuss the
relationship.
- Line 284: IC (intracellular) might be a little
confusing because it looks “independent component”. If they could come up
a better abbreviation, that would be good.
- Lines 306-209 &
Figure 11: The relationship between algorithm time and data time is
not clear. The main text says 31 sec of algorithm time was necessary for
processing 4 min of a single channel data. But Figure 11 indicates that 31
sec of algorithm time is necessary for 150 sec of data. Please clarify.
- Lines 356 & 364: “… one example of “135” examples where
OPASS believed that multiple waveforms were overlapping” and “… we detect,
“37” of them we believe to be overlapping” are confusing. Please clarify
why the numbers are different.
- Line 427: It is educational
if the authors could discuss the number of channels when the slope exceeds
1.
- Line 492: It should be “Section 2.2”.
Q2: Please summarize your review in 1-2
sentences
The paper describes a novel online spike sorting
algorithm that is capable of learning the number of separable neurons and
resolve overlapping spikes. The method is expected to have a major impact
to a neuroscience community. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_2
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
http://nips.cc/PaperInformation/ReviewerInstructions)
This paper introduces a Bayesian nonparametric method
to address the problem of spike detection and sorting (i.e. for jointly
detecting neural spikes and assigning them to neurons). These steps are
naturally of critical importance to many computational models of neural
spiking data as they essentially create the 'ground truth' data on which
many models operate. Improving these methods thus is of great interest to
the wider computational neuroscience community. The authors develop an
efficient online method based on the gamma process that models both the
waveforms of spikes for each neuron and the assignment of spikes to
neurons. The use of a Chinese restaurant process elegantly allows the
model to add new neurons (i.e. the number of neurons from which spikes are
detected does not need to be specified a priori). There are some neat
features to the model, such as the ability to model non-stationary
waveforms (i.e. varying over time). The authors perform an empirical
comparison to previous state of the art approaches that provides a
compelling case for their method and provide an interesting discussion.
Quality: The authors derive a model that is conceptually quite
complex although neat and appears correct. The novel concepts, methods and
empirical analysis are of high quality. The writing should be improved on
(this perhaps falls under the clarity category) particularly to clarify
the model, although this can be done for a camera ready.
Clarity:
As stated above, the model is rather complex. The authors try to
explain the model by starting with simpler models (i.e. a homogenous
Poisson process) and then in a step by step fashion add complexity and
draw connections to various distributions until they arrive to what their
model actually is. I believe this is an attempt to explain their approach
to the reader in an accessible way, but I feel it is somewhat confusing.
Rather than draw parallels to the entire Bayesian nonparametrics toolbox,
it would be better in my opinion to state what the actual model is and
then explain the assumptions taken to arrive at this model. I think this
is also an opportunity to reclaim a significant amount of space (which is
clearly scarce here) which can be used to put in a diagram (graphical
model) of the model(s) introduced in this paper.
Originality:
This appears to be original work and addresses some shortcomings of
previous approaches. There are similar approaches to spike sorting (e.g.
the Dirichlet process mixture models for spike sorting of Gasthaus et
al.). However, this paper makes significantly more than delta changes to
those works in the model, in how it adapts the waveforms and performs real
time spike sorting using variational Bayesian methods.
Significance: As stated above, spike sorting and detecting are
two critical early steps in the computational neuroscience modeling
pipeline. Thus improving accuracy would be very useful to many
computational models which analyse the data resulting from these steps and
improving speed can significantly help achieve real time decoding and move
towards larger populations of neurons.
Detailed comments: 48:
inference -> infer 52: develop -> developing 58: that that
77: It sounds a bit strange to say that you 'relax' simplifying
assumptions - i.e. sounds like you make them simpler 79: as -> are
90: Rather that -> Rather than 163: The mean and covariance are
drawn from a Wishart distribution, of which the parameters are drawn from
the CRP correct? Perhaps you should add another line in the equation array
to make this clear. 183: Twiddles is not a word I am familiar with.
Tildes? 184: Associate -> Associated 185: in -> is 197:
the subvector 209: I really appreciate Algorithm 1 - I think this
should be in the main text if you can find space 224: case a ->
case of a 424: being estimates? 428: "embarassingly" parallel
sounds rather colloquial and sarcastic
The paper states that code
is provided in the supplementary materials to run the models introduced in
the paper. I would like to run this code to verify but I can't find it in
the supplementaries.
A reference that motivates the importance of
waveform non-stationarity. G. Santhanam, M. D. Linderman, V. Gilja, A.
Afshar, S. I. Ryu, T. H. Meng, and K. V. Shenoy. HermesB: A continuous
neural recording system for freely behaving primates. IEEE Transactions on
Biomedical Engineering, 54(11):2037–2050, 2007.
One concern of
this reviewer in the nature of the empirical evaluation is that the ground
truth is from only on a single neuron from a single data set. Naturally, I
sympathize that obtaining such data is rather difficult and we are lucky
that even this ground truth data exists and is provided online. However,
it does raise a number of concerns - is it possible that we can overfit as
a community if we all attempt to achieve state of the art on this single
neuron. Furthermore, what is the guarantee that the assumptions made in
this work hold for this particular neuron (or a particular class) but
don't for others (e.g. we know different classes of neuron exhibit very
different patterns of behavior).
It may be useful to state that
[23] compares empirically to a number of models that your method doesn't
directly compare to such as [27]. So although not comparing directly to
that work you are more or less comparing by
proxy. Q2: Please summarize your review in 1-2
sentences
This paper develops a conceptually complex but
appropriate model for joint spike detection and sorting using recent
advances in Bayesian nonparametric methods. This is a nice solution to a
problem that is of interest to most researchers interested in analyzing
neural spike trains from populations of neurons. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_6
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
http://nips.cc/PaperInformation/ReviewerInstructions)
The authors describe a new online method for spike
sorting called OPASS. They tackle a number of important issues for spike
sorting: overlapping spike, changing waveforms over time, real-time spike
sorting and compatibility with multiple channels. Such computationally
efficient algorithms will be much needed given recent developments in
recording technology. The authors demonstrate convincingly with
interesting comparisons the superiority of their method. They combine a
bunch of clever tricks and ideas like the color noise modeling through a
GP or the changing waveforms. However, the exposition of the method is
dense and could be improved (I wouldn’t know where to even start
implementing the algorithm!). Given the computational complexity, I am
still puzzled how the authors achieved real-time performance. They might
want to elaborate on that. My advice to the authors would be to
shorten some of the grandiose statements in the introduction and use the
freed space to explain the key ingredients in more detail. As a general
remark, I don’t think it is helping NIPS papers to have extensive
supplementary material – so the authors might want to shorten theirs.
Also, code would be very helpful and should be made available with the
paper (I would really love to compare to our algorithms). Finally, the
authors may want to spell check the manuscript.
Q2: Please summarize your review in 1-2
sentences
Important advance in spike sorting
Q1:Author
rebuttal: Please respond to any concerns raised in the reviews. There are
no constraints on how you want to argue your case, except for the fact
that your text should be limited to a maximum of 6000 characters. Note
however that reviewers and area chairs are very busy and may not read long
vague rebuttals. It is in your own interest to be concise and to the
point.
We thank the reviewers for their positive comments, as
well as their suggestions for improvements. Thanks especially for pointing
out typos and details of the experiments that weren't clear. Below we've
included our responses to the larger concerns/specific questions.
Availability of the code: We haven't made our code public yet
because of concerns over the double blind nature of the review but will
make it public at the earliest opportunity.
R2: 163: The mean and
covariance are drawn from a Wishart distribution, of which the parameters
are drawn from the CRP correct? That is correct.
R2: 209: I
really appreciate Algorithm 1 - I think this should be in the main text if
you can find space
We agree with this. We will try to shorten the
introduction, and include this. We will use this to help clarify inference
(we agree with reviewer 3 that this is a bit dense).
R2: It may be
useful to state that [23] compares empirically to a number of models that
your method doesn't directly compare to such as [27]. So although not
comparing directly to that work you are more or less comparing by proxy.
That is a fair point and we will add this to the paper.
R3:- Lines 306-209 & Figure 11: The relationship between
algorithm time and data time is not clear. The main text says 31 sec of
algorithm time was necessary for processing 4 min of a single channel
data. But Figure 11 indicates that 31 sec of algorithm time is necessary
for 150 sec of data. Please clarify.
This axis on Figure 11 was
incorrect. It has been remade and will be corrected in the final version.
Additionally, we will add the curves for multichannel data.
R3:-
Lines 356 & 364: “… one example of “135” examples where OPASS
believed that multiple waveforms were overlapping” and “… we detect, “37”
of them we believe to be overlapping” are confusing. Please clarify why
the numbers are different.
The algorithm detected 135 total
overlapping spikes; for the “intracellular” neuron, 37 of our detections
are from overlapping spikes. This means that 37 of the total 135
overlapping spikes corresponded to the “intracellular” neuron.
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